Im pretty sure not everything we see in the flashbacks is the exact same thing what tremolo reads.I know that DPC keeps showing off how hot Lynette is while Fuckface is reading her diary, I'm guessing to set up a full lewd of Neil pumping their son into her. It's not common, but there are a handful of lewds without the MC. I'm just trying to figure out how he'd go about presenting it.
Tremolo is reading about a date with Neil that is going very well, or he visits her again, and things start getting hot and heavy. Assuming she actually writes that they're having sex, will he stop reading immediately but the scene plays out regardless? Or would he be reading with someone else in the room (Zoey or one of our girlfriends), and they snatch the book away and read aloud how his mom is getting plowed.
OR, Lynette makes it sound like it was just a romantic evening together, and that's what MC is imagining. But in reality, it's some sweaty steamy sex between an unobtainable character model and a guy who looks like Derek with metal teeth.
DPC is showing the reader the past while tremolo may gets a less detailed version of it (starting with simple logical things like Lynette probably isn’t describing in detail how her naked body looks like).
And who the fuck writes excessive details of their sex in a diary? Other maybe the fact that it happens and was „good“ or „romantic“ or whatever.
Doubt she will write pages about how Neil kept thrusting in and out lmao