lucadiadis

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Man, this is one of the most complex(in terms of writing) H games I ever know. On a side note, I wonder if ED ever has a chance? And Seymour is nothing but foreplay, it's quite sad.
1. Yes indeed. Probably The One.
2. And no, for now. Seems it was a potential path EK abandoned, I won't cry over it.
3. And don't even bring that up, there are religious fanatics even on this porn forum.
 

GokutheG

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Man, this is one of the most complex(in terms of writing) H games I ever know. On a side note, I wonder if ED ever has a chance? And Seymour is nothing but foreplay, it's quite sad.
From what I gathered Ed had a route planned but the dev decided to axe it pretty early in development. Personally I really enjoy the parental type support she gets from Ed and Molly since her own mom is such a disappointment.
 

Triepslay

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If you mean having Holly sleep with Lena/Ivy she won't do that either I believe. In order to have Holly fall under Ivy's influence she has to sleep with her and that is something she doesn't do if she's dating Ian.
If you want her to sleep with Lena that is also blocked.
I just meant her being more loose I guess? I don't want her sleeping around but more comfortable with being bolder. I just finished the route but I'll change some options I chose. Thanks for the answers!.
 

GokutheG

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I just meant her being more loose I guess? I don't want her sleeping around but more comfortable with being bolder. I just finished the route but I'll change some options I chose. Thanks for the answers!.
You're welcome. Yeah Lena and Ivy can make Holly bolder without sleeping with them or cheating on Ian. You get more options for that if you have her join pole dancing and Lena can help keep Ivy from pushing Holly too far as well.
 
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Turret

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You're welcome. Yeah Lena and Ivy can make Holly bolder without sleeping with them or cheating on Ian. You get more options for that if you have her join pole dancing and Lena can help keep Ivy from pushing Holly too far as well.
In addition Ian can also help getting Holly being bolder without cheating and stuff. And while it is really great that Ian, Lena and (to a certain point) Ivy can help sweet Holly becoming bolder without her cheating on Ian or Lena, it would also be great if there were a path where Ian and wild Holly can become a dedicated couple. And a confident Ian at that, who likes Holly being slutty.
So in essence a "medium" path for wild slut Holly. Instead becoming more and more like Ivy, finally getting into a relationship with an Ian being ok with her being a slut(which was her push to being bolder, getting Ian to "see" her) would keep her wild, but with a red line this Holly would not cross because she now got Ian, whom she wanted to begin with.
 

lucadiadis

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I just meant her being more loose I guess? I don't want her sleeping around but more comfortable with being bolder. I just finished the route but I'll change some options I chose. Thanks for the answers!.
Oh that's very easy: 1. when Holly and Lena go to Ivy's place to have wine, do not stay at Ivy's and go back to Lena's to watch a movie. 2. At Ivy's birthday, when Mark starts hitting on Holly make Lena interrupt them. The corruption path with Ivy in then closed but she still gets cooler.
 

Ray_D

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And that's how you get all the likes of horny apes who just want to wank on a drawn bimbo with fake tits shagging Peter Parker.
To be fair, I'm here for the story and the bizarre situations that come out of eva's mind. Although lately I'm more interested in winning the MMA tournament and the book contest, they are goals that appeal more to me. :Kappa:
 

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During this week I've been splitting work between art and writing, as usual.
I've finished all the drawings needed for a major scene and they've been sent to the colorist. During this stage I'm also structuring how the scene will play out, and lately I've been using storyboards to plan things out, as scenes become more complex. Before, coming up with the structure and choosing which images to use to illustrate it was simpler, but now I take some time to think things through and I end up shuffling the order and flow of the scene until I find something that I'm happy with. I can't share those in a public post due to Patreon's guidelines, but I will in a private post if you guys are interested in seeing some bts stuff.
As I mentioned in my , writing is quite challenging, especially the in-between scenes that connect the major plot points. These are specially important in this update, since I'm trying to create an atmosphere that feels fresh, fun and natural and that immerses you in a summer vacation with friends. This becomes especially difficult and tedious when a single scene can have so many variations depending on how you've developed the different relationships. Often times I get the feeling I'm not managing to convincingly create dialogue that flows naturally and scenes that evoke that cozy, familiar feeling, having to chop up every dialogue in different possibilities, accounting for the various reactions characters should display and generally coming up with interesting and well-written situations that don't feel a drag to read or feel inconsistent.
I wonder if you guys got that feeling with the last update, or you're finding it satisfying enough. In this last chapter, which scenes if any were your favourites? Did you enjoy a setpiece over the rest or did a particular interaction stood out to you? What did you find missing, anddo you have any suggestions to tackle this issue and make interactions more interesting? I'm interested in hearing your thoughts and opinions; in the meanwhile I'm doing my best to craft evocative and coherent moments. Hopefully I'm doing a good enough job!
 
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